03 - Waking Up
Feb 16, 2015
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I hate to be 'That person' but there are tons of little grammar mistakes such as using past tense when it should be present tense. For example, "Guild was released yesterday and nobody see you there", it should be 'saw' instead of 'see'. I really like your comic and I don't want to discourage you at all!!! But I know many authors I follow usually appreciate the corrective criticism.
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